Sunday, November 11, 2012

Open Prompt. November 11th


2006. Many writers use a country setting to establish values within a work of literature. For example, the country may be a place of virtue and peace or one of primitivism and ignorance. Choose a novel or play in which such a setting plays a significant role. Then write an essay in which you analyze how the country setting functions in the work as a whole.
                  In Arthur Miller’s Death of A Salesman, he uses the setting to help convey certain meanings to the audience. The Loman family is based in a city like setting, surrounded by apartment buildings and other individuals. However, their house hasn’t always been like this. It was originally more in the open, and during this time the two boys, Biff and Happy, were merely men. As they were growing up, Willy had taught them that the only important thing to success was being well liked and having a good physical appearance. As soon as they were faced with life after high school, they realized this was false the hard way. The country setting helps show individualism, self-discovery, and potential.
                  After high school, Biff was forced to find a way to make a living for him self. He traveled out to the far west, and found work on a farm. Unknown to him at the time, the audience could eventually tell that on the farmlands, Biff was content with himself and free from being forced to do something he didn’t want to do by his father Willy. When around Willy, Biff feels that he needs to lie to him in order to make him happy about what he has done with his life. While out in the country, Biff has opportunity. He can do what ever he wants with his life. While he is out west, he realizes the importance that he has. However, all of that goes away when he finally comes back to visit Willy
                  The American West symbolizes potential and future success. Biff could have a lot going for him, yet he grew up in such a materialistic society. Miller tries to show his audience that Biff needs to find himself by leaving his hometown. Going out West is just the way to do it. His escape from Willy’s delusions and the American East’s materialism suggests how he is discovering himself. Biff needs to realize that looks and being well liked won’t get you anywhere in life, and growing up on a farm, away from material society is just the place to discover himself. When he comes back, he knows that he screwed up his life. He realizes how he grew up with such a false view of success, and that he would have to start all over again.
                  If Miller didn’t include this part in the play, Biff would not be a dynamic character. He would simply always be living in the falsity of becoming successful the “Loman” way. Including the American West in the play helped convey ideas of individualism, self-discovery, and potential. Without these, the play would simply be a depressing story about how some people simply can’t get anywhere in life.

3 comments:

  1. First off, great pick for this prompt; Death of the Salesman's setting definitely functions in the work as a whole. After reading your prompt though, It seems like you're a bit repetitive with the "west". For each support, you use the opportunities in the west as your argument. I feel like this whole prompt could almost be put into a paragraph because of that. Also, in my opinion, individualism, self-discovery, and potential are all so specific and similar, that it could be hard to become even more specific through with your supports. For your argument, it could sound better if it wasn't so related to Biff, but the story as a whole. I do, though, like how you avoided plot summary and chose to important details needed. You seem to understand deeper levels of the meaning in the play, which is awesome! Other than that, I think that a little edit here and there would help your prompt.

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  2. Julia, I also think that this prompt fits really well with Death of A Salesman, and for a timed writing piece its great. I think that there is one thing that you really really need to say if you talk about Salesman and setting, and that is the house, the garden and its surroundings. Much of the play is set in the kitchen, bedrooms and the garden, and when thinking about setting I think this is very important.
    Although your ideas are good and structured well, I think they focus too much on the setting of the farmland. It isn't as important to the main message of the play as other things that could be discussed.
    I think you did a good job putting together your ideas in the essay, but they need a bit more focus, something you should practice before the exam in May.

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  3. I agree with Gloria that this essay has a lot of repetition. You have a lot of good details and support for the American West symbol but you're talking in circles a bit. I think if you had more of an introduction paragraph it would help you organize your thoughts and the rest of you paragraphs. Also, I agree with Chris that there is a lot more symbolism involving setting, but in a timed essay I think picking out only a few like you did here is a good idea. All of your details and support are correct and make sense you just need to be more direct. Nice work!

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